Ravenstrike - Shadowclan - tom

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Name: Ravenstrike
Age: 26 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Warrior
Short Description: A dark brown mackerel tabby tom with pale yellow eyes.
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Appearance Description:

He has a mackeral designed coat. His stripes are black with a black tipped tail. His fur is thicker then all his siblings combined. His paws and head seem to be bigger in size. His fur color is various browns, whites, and a little black here and there. He is very muscular for a Shadowclanner. Showing his heritage along that long line to Thunderclan. He does stay very warm during the winter and a little warmer then his siblings in the summer.

His body make up is off strength and very little agility. His eye color is a light light pale yellow. That are always shining with his silent emotions and arguements.

Personality Description:

He is unlike his other brothers and his sister. He isn't weak and doesn't manipulate she-cats. He strongly believes in honor and tries his best to let other cats see this. He hated how his brother Monster could easily manipulate every warrior and she-cat to like him. He couldn't tell the others for everyone shrugged him off. Even after Ravenstrike called his brother a bully and a lair. No cat cared to agree and help in his silent rebellion against his brother. He hated how Monster gain popularity for looks and power. He had more strength though he never spoke out.

All through the moons of being a kitten to his warrior hood he was invisible. He wasn't ever helped. He wasn't ever encouraged or loved by his brother. He felt like an outsider of the clan. That feeling grew when his brother became the leader. Though only a few moons after there was constant battles with Thunderclan.

Rvaenstrike always knew why. It was his brother sense of power and possession. He had gotten a she-cat and she fell in love. Ravenstrike always knew the truth that every warrior seemed to miss. Especially the she-cats.

The one she-cat he had loved, Monster had overwhelmed and controlled. Ravenstrike felt a great jealousy toward his brother. He may have arguments with himself about never being like Frogcreep and Silentfeather.

History:

Kitten hood:

He was the runt of his family. He had stripes his siblings had spots. He had thicker longer fur. While they did not. From the very beginning his brothers(Roughtkit & Frogkit) and sister(Silentkit), had pretend he was no there. Of course his sister Silentkit tried to be friends with him. However she was instantly pushed away by her brother Roughkit. Who soon after found a way to control her.

Feeling lonely and searching for a way to be outspoken and not all alone. Ravenkit turned to stories. He loved how the elders always talked about fighting as a heroism deed. He wanted to be that a hero. He imagined becoming a strong warrior protecting the weak. He imagined becoming that cat who always spoke his mind. He loved the idea. A she-cat who was born two moons after Ravenkit had taken an interest in Ravenkit's loneliness. She would always talk to him. Just one-on-one all alone. No evil brother getting in between wanting all the attention and control.

apprentice hood:

Ravenkit was glade to become Ravenpaw. He felt released from his kin who ignored him. He looked forward to becoming that great hero he had dreamed of. His mentor Crowfrost helped him on this way. However Ravenkit always messed up. It seemed the only thing he was good at was catching frogs in the mud. He felt his courage and his will to be a hero fade. His brother, Roughpaw, just seemed to make everything perfect. He felt a strong jealousy toward the fact Roughpaw gave every other cat attention.. He helped them improve. However ignored Ravenpaw. The one that needed most encouragement.

Ravenpaw watched Tinykit grow up wanting to get closer to her. She would be an apprentice two moons after him. He tried to sneakily teach her things about being a warrior. He grew close to her However she grew close to Roughpaw. A regular she-cat crush.

Time passed and eventually Tinykit became Tinypaw. Ravenpaw quickly found out she was a whole lot better then him. She was instantly popular in all the apprentices and was drawing closer to Roughpaw. Ravenpaw noticed that his brother had a really close relationship with their sister. He was disgusted by it and pointed it out to other warriors. Only they shrugged and said there was no such thing. He once again felt like an outsider. Only worse then before.

warrior hood:

He received his name after his siblings. To his silent shame. Crowfrost just said he wasn't ready. That there was something holding him back. Ravenpaw always knew what it was. His name Ravenstrike was created by the day he successfully attacked a young warrior and defeated him. However no cat could ever understood how. Crowfrost always silently knew.

Ravenstrike did his best to be the best warrior. He found out that Roughbat had some sort of relationship with almost every female in all the clans. He was disgusted by his brother, though secretily admired him. His love Tinypaw had became a warrior the same day as him. She had taken the name Tinywing. She suddenly grew instrested in Ravenstrike. To Ravenstrike shockness. She actually played with him and willing to sleep next to him. Slowly his once crush grew to true love. However there was a catch. Roughbat had convinced her to do it. Roughbat wanted to break Rvaenstrike's silent rebellion against him.

One night Tinywing told Rvanestrike to meet er outside the camp. He was a fool and went toward the area she said. He found Tinywing and Roughbat together. Both doing it and enjoying it. Rvaenstrike ins his silent demeanor ran away heart broken. His anger for his brother grew immense and he was officially silently exiled within hi own clan. He felt like a hundred percent outsider.

The only thing that kept him in the clans was his silent loyalty to Starclan and the hero stories. As time passed he tried to be that hero in the story. Only to be out shined and done by his brother. He debated for a long time on whether to leave the clans and never come back. Though something in his heart always stopped him.

Tinywing ended up having kittens. They all did not resemble his brother. Which was quite odd being she was sneaking with him almost every night. Ravenstrike knew. He would always knew. Ravenstrike tried to rebuild his relationship with Tinywing. However every time he saw her pretty perfect face he saw her doing it over and over and he couldn't take it.

Ravenstrike watched as his brother gained ranks and soon became leader. Tinywing's kittens grew to apprentices and soon to be warriors. He hoped to never mentor one. Though he was never given an apprentice and felt as though no cat knew he was there.

As those kittens grew so did problems with Thunderclan. ravenstrike always silently believed that Roughtstar planned it all wanting control. He believed that Roughstar is ambitious and wants control. One night a she-cat was attacked. He had quickly exited the warrior den to see his brother over the she-cat obviously trying to do it. She was very young and was the prettiest she-cat in the clan next to Tinywing. She was Tinywing's sister(Astralflight). Ravenstrike instantly took control and made the situation worse. He was glade to help on kicking his brother out of the clan.

Soon Shadowstar replaced Roughstar. He took very good command and had ended up picking his daughter to be deputy. Who soon became leader. Tinywing's kittens ended up being apprentices and Ravenstrike found hismelf apprenticing one of the kittens, Softpaw. He hated this fate however accepted it. He decided to train the apprentice on everything from the very beginning. He told her stories and let her know all about Roughstar and his deeds.

Soon his apprentice Softpaw became a warrior. Ravenstrike was very proud of the she-cat. Felt as if she to will be a great warrior. He felt as if she was his very own daughter and still treats her as such. She ended up taking th name Softlight. She oddly looked exactly like Astralflight.

Ravenstrike after what seemed like moons finally felt like he was a warrior of Shadowclan. Though that can easily be erased with a little manipulation.

Parents:

Two normal Shadowclan warriors.

Siblings:

Monster: Oh he is alive and well. He is planning to build himself and army and get revenge. Ravenstrike may claim to never join him, with the right words. I guarantee he would.

Frogcreep: He doesn't really care for him. in fact Ravenstrike stays far from his brother. He silently feels he'll rub off.

Silenfeather: He pities his sister and wish there was some way he could help her. He hopes to have the power to mentor a kitten. He wants to show them true warrior ship.

Mate: He has none.
Offspring:

He has none

Other Significant Cats:

Tinywing: A she-cat that had abused and used him. He silently loves her. however always speaks rudely and mean to her. Loves to give her the cold shoulder.

Softlight : One of his apprentices. She looks exactly like Astralflight only younger. Ravenstrike feels as if she is his own daughter. He will always be ready to defend her.

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