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[cutiecrona13]

Name: Crona
Age: 192 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: ShadowClan
Status: Alive
Rank: Warrior
Short Description:
Picture:
Appearance Description:

I have pink furry ears,i have some fur in my ears so it gets hard to hear people sometimes.My tail is also pink.The rest of my body is black.My chest is really furry.My claws are red,my eyes and claws change black when I'm angry.It sometimes happens when I'm fighting too.When my eyes are not black they're purple.Whenever im scared,tired,or my heart rate is too fast or too slow my ears and my tail turn purple instead of pink.I have a moon birthmark on my right hind leg.I also have quite a bit of fur over my eyes thats pink.I carry a chain on my leg as a symbol that ill always be trapped.

Personality Description:

I may be in the shadowclan but i get scared pretty easy.I look pretty weak but im a great fighter.If you mess with me lets just say you mess with the bull you get the horns.I dont have any real friends just people i talk too.Call me pinkie your asking for a fight.

History:

When i was a child someone murdered my mother and my siblings so im an only child.My father was always a cruel cat to me.I am forbidden to have friends.He makes me kill so i can get stronger,he always tells me the more i kill the stronger i get and someday i will be the strongest and defeat every clan by myself.My life has been the same since my siblings and mother died,kill is mainly what i do.I only have cousins now.

Parents:

Crystalpaw my mother.She was murdered when i was little.Darkstar is my father.Hes cruel and uncaring.

Siblings:

Shadowstripe my brother,he was killed when he was 60 moons old.Darktail my sister,she was killed when still was 132 moons old.

Mentor: Darkstar
Apprentice: Ive had no apprentices.
Mate: I dont have a mate.
Offspring:

I had no offspring yet.

Other Significant Cats:

Songbreeze is the closest person i have.Songbreeze is almost my friend.

Other:

This is my first character.I found this site from a link Songbreeze gave me.

[CheshireCat]

Wow! Very nice entry! ;D I have only 4 suggestion.

First of all, (you don't absolutely have to do this unless she was born into the clan) her name must be a two-part name like other clan cats. You can do something like Cronafang or whatever. If you would like it to stay just Crona, please describe something i her history that gave her that name (she used to be a rogue, she lost her second name because she was killing everyone, she named herself, etc.)

Second of all, clan cats usually become elders at 55 moons and then die at 70 moons, since they were bred to live indoors. Right now, Crona would be very dead, so you'd want to change it.

Third of all, cats can't genetically look like Crona. You can still keep the pink theme goign on by making her an albino, which is essentially a white cat with pink claws, nose, pawpads, inner ears, and reddish pink eyes.

Lastly is the length. As much as I love the entry, the appearance, personality, and history are not long enough. If you look next to the text area when modifying your post, you'll see the word minimum.

Overall, great job! Welcome to TGA!!