Fallenpaw

[fallenshadow]

Name: Fallenpaw
Age: 6 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: WindClan
Status: Alive
Rank: Apprentice
IC Group: -Rank
Short Description: A small brown tabby she-cat with hazel eyes.
Picture: images.wikia.com/hollyleaf/images/5/5e/Hareshine.jpg
Appearance Description:

Fallenpaw is a rather small brown tabby. Her legs are a little are long and muscular. she has a thin frame. The base color of her fur is a light brown. Her stripes a a really dark brown. She has very lean muscle but you can still tell that she is muscular. Her fur is still as soft as a kits and just as fluffy. Her face is rather soft and round. She still looks just like a kit. although she is alot more muscular its just that her pelt hides it.Her eyes are a very light shade of brown. Her eyes are very round and large. Her fur is of medium length. Fallen has no scars that you can see. But Fallenpaw has a lot of scars under her pelt because she fell into a bramble patch when she was a kit. Which caused her to get pretty scratched up from it.

Personality Description:

Fallenpaw is very calm and quiet. This she-cat is very mature for her age. Only a few things get under her skin. She does not like being called a kit and is willing to prove that she isnt in any way possible. She is very proud of her clan and hates it when other cats say something out of place of windclan. She is very loyal and helpful but can have a bad attitude but that is very rare. She has some friends but most of them are older than her. She likes to be with cats that are just as mature butt her and prefers them to the cats her age.Fallenpaw is not very ambitious and prefers to see what will happen. She is very loving towards her clan. But sometimes she doesn’t have good patients but most of the time she does. Fallenpaw is ver trustworthy and never gives away secrets.

History:

As a kit Fallenpaw was very queit and didnt speak up much. This worried her parents very much. They thought she was lonely since there were no other kits in the nursery when she was born. So Fallen paw did not have many freinds while she was in the nursery. She wasnt really a playful kit eaither she prefered just to think or maybe practice fighting with a older cat. As a apprentice Fallenpaw was calm and willing to do anything. She is ver succesful because she practiced alot while she was on the nusery. She is determined to become a powerful warrior that everyone would respect. Although Fallenpaw did act immature sometimes but she used it to make herself smarter. For example one day Fallenpaw decided to go out into the forest by herself as a kit. She snuck out of the camp by pretending that she was going to go make dirt. She snuck her way through a little tunnel she found. And found her on windclans fields. She kept walking and walking but Fallenpaw wasn’t old enough to know about scent borders so she accidently walked into thunderclans territory. She ran into a patrol and soon realized that they weren’t windclan and she started to run but ended up tripping and falling into a bramble patch. The thunderclan warriors caught up to her and to took her back to windclan. From that day forward she was known as Fallenkit but now she is Fallenpaw.

Parents:

Fallenpaw's mother's name is Brownpelt: Brownpelt is a loving cat who cares deeply for Fallenpaw. She is also ready to protect her clan no matter what.
Fallenpaw's Father is Twigtail: Twigtail is a respected warrior. Alls he wants is for For is Fallenpaw to be a strong warrior.

Siblings:

none

Mentor: Roseblossom
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[CheshireCat]

Very well done! Meet the word count and it will be automatically accepted. 150+ words for appearance and personality and 200+ for history. You're very close, so it shouldn't be that hard.

[♦Ginger♦]

Fallen it would go faster if you say you corrected the bio.

Anyway, Accepted.

[fallenshadow]

oh kk thanx