A Walk & Fight for your life(Breezy & Ches)

[Breezy~Chan]

*Whitepaw*

The silver spotted tabby she cat ran through the woods to meet up with her mentor for a day of relaxing. She spent a lot of time with Fallenstar and it was always fun. Well not that time when a fox found them. Whitepaw sighed "What a waste of a good day that had been" she thought to herself. The young apprentice was good at finding Clanmates most of the time when she wasn't thinking of something else. Whitepaw started to slow down to a trot as she cought the scent of her leader near by. She hoped that Fallenstar with never keep anything from her and if he was to leave, to take her with him. Whitepaw saw him as the father she lost and it would break her if he left. Whitepaw shook her head to get those thoughts out of her head "He would never leave the Clan, what am I thinking" she said to herself silently. Crazy thoughts sometimes came to her and well this was one of them. Whitepaw knew that Fallenstar would never leave RiverClan or her, he was like a father to her. He knew she had hard time after Crowfeather's death. Whitepaw knew that he knows that it would kill her. Whitepaw passed through some bushes hoping to find Fallenstar on the other side.

[CheshireCat]

[smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]
( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )

Fallenstar sat in the clearing, smiling. Training with Whitepaw had made him a generally happier cat that he usually was. He was very proud of how well she was doing for such a young cat. Suddenly he heard a rustling in the bushes in front of him. He focused on it saw his apprentice bounce through. " Whitepaw! Good to see you! Today we will be working on -- " Suddenly Fallenstar stopped. He felt a par of eyes boring into his back, but when he turned around, no one was there. " Whitepaw, did you bring a friend or something? Anyway, we will be working on battle practice on land. Watch me. " Fallenstar reared up on his hind legs, appearing to be much, much bigger than he really was. Even on the ground, Fallenstar was a big cat. Suddenly, as Fallenstar stood, balancing on his hind feet, he heard a snarl come from behind him and was knocked down to the ground, the breath knocked out of him as some thing's claws dug into his back.

" this is you speaking! "

" this is someone else speaking! "

[smear:559251]I CAN'T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU THINK YOU GAVE ME[/smear:286ba4]
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[smear:286ba4]W O R D S[/smear:559251] • 177
[smear:286ba4]T A G G E D[/smear:559251] • Whitepaw, Diablo
[smear:286ba4]N O T E S[/smear:559251] • meow

beauty is skin deep ,

[atrb=style, background: #000000; border: dashed #ffffff 4px; border-radius:35px 0px 35px 0px;] [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, border: dashed #000000 3px; width: 400px; height: 500px; float: left; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 20px; padding-bottom: 25px; padding-top: 25px;] diablo Diablo stalked along the stream, hoping to find something he could sink his claws into. For all he knew, he wasn't in ShadowClan territory, but he was on some other clan's land. Not like he cared in the first place. He just needed something to kill, to waste, and by what some ratty she-cat had told him, this was the place to find it. He saw a large fish swim by and smiled evilly. His one good eye followed it as he raced along the streams edge. Suddenly it stopped, and Diablo jerked to halt. He waited for the right moment then -- WHAM! He dove in, viciously assaulting the fish. He wrestled with it before bringing it up to the surface. It was almost as big as he was. He hissed at the now dead fish and sunk his claws into it, ripping the flesh into scraps of meat. This fish wasn't worth eating anymore, but that wasn't why he had come here. He needed information; something that these cats knew about ShadowClan that he didn't. However, he wasn't gonna do it the polite way; Diablo never was one for talking. He was going to let them know he was there and force it out of them when they came to boot him off the territory. He could take down at least one. Diablo stopped for a minute and listened with two of his ears - the extra two didn't work in the first place. He heard voices -- cats' voices. The tom smiled evilly; this was his chance. He crept up behind the bushes and spotted his victims. There was a large gray tom and a small silver she-cat. The she-cat looked young; she wasn't worth his time. The large one, however, looked like he would know a thing or two. He watched him for a few moments, and when the tom turned around, sensing Diablo's presence, he stepped back wards, allowing the tom to think all was fine. Then the cat showed weakness. He was precariously balancing on his hind legs; a position he could easily be taken down from if attacked from behind. Diablo crouched and let out a fearsome battle cry and launched himself onto the tom. He landed squarely where he had hoped and began scrabbling his claws on the stunned tom's back. Settle down and this will end quickly! He hissed into the tom's ear and snarled at the young she-cat daring her to stop him.

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[Breezy~Chan]

*Whitepaw*

The young apprentice was the frist one to relize what Fallenstar was talking when she saw the other tom race at her leader "Fallenstar watch ou......" Whitepaw wasn't able to get it out before the tom had him. She stared in shock at frist with wide blue eyes. But than anger took hold of her and even with the toms warning or more like he was daring her to try to attack him. Whitepaw swiftly ran at the tom and jumpped on to his back to bit down on the back of his nack as they fell off of Fallenstar. She clawed the tom with no fear at all. He wasn't going to take Fallenstar away from her or the clan, he was like another father to her. She wouldn't let him be taken away. Whitepaw held on with a strong grip and pulled at his fur without ripping his flesh off his nack. But Whitepaw tasted blood and she was going to make this a painful as possible for this tom who would dare think she was weak, just because of her small size. How dare he try to harm Fallenstar. Whitepaw clawed his shoulder as she finally leaped off of the tom and stood between him and Fallenstar. She would protect those she trusted and cared for with all her might.

[CheshireCat]

[smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]
( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )

Fallenstar soon regained his conciousness only to hear a vicious voice whispering in his ear. " Settle down and this will end quickly! " Fallenstar had never heard that voice before, but he was sure of one thing. It wasn't a clanner. Fallenstar winced as he tried to stand up with the tom on top of him and looked at the blood dripping from his back. How could I have been so foolish! Just then he noticed the weight being dragged off of him. THe tom saw Whitepaw clawing furiously at the tom to defend Fallenstar. He studied the rogue closely and noticed his blind eye. " He's blind in his left eye! Stay on his blind side! " Fallenstar would've jumped in to help her, but his right forelimb was bleeding heavily and he couldn't risk injuring it any more. Then Whitepaw jumped in front of him, protecting him from the evil rogue.

" this is you speaking! "

" this is someone else speaking! "

[smear:559251]I CAN'T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU THINK YOU GAVE ME[/smear:286ba4]
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[smear:286ba4]W O R D S[/smear:559251] • 154
[smear:286ba4]T A G G E D[/smear:559251] • Whitepaw.
[smear:286ba4]N O T E S[/smear:559251] • Careful on the powerplaying.

beauty is skin deep ,

[atrb=style, background: #000000; border: dashed #ffffff 4px; border-radius:35px 0px 35px 0px;] [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, border: dashed #000000 3px; width: 400px; height: 500px; float: left; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 20px; padding-bottom: 25px; padding-top: 25px;] diablo Diablo hissed as he tore into the big tom's back, enjoying every moment. Suddenly the small she-cat came after him. Diablo had ovbviously underestimated her. She was strong and fast and was repeating the same move he had just used moments ago on himself. She grabbed his scruff, freezing him for a moment, but then he took action. He thrashed wildly, flipping ove ronto the ground and trying to scrabble at her belly. If she didn't stay up she would just fall under him, giving him the advantage. He tore himself away from the she-cat and lashed out at her ears and face. He worked furiosly, determined to turned them into shreds, but one of his swipes missed and hit the she-cat's right eye. REalizing what he had done he backed away slowly, hissing low to the ground. Now you see what I have lived with as a reminder at what I must do. He snarled fiercely, looking at the gray tom. ShadowClan! Tell me everything you know about them!

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[Breezy~Chan]

*Whitepaw*

The young she cat yowled out in pain as a claw hit her right eye. The vision from it didn't fade at frist, but as she moved quick to keep from getting hit from other attacks. Color and sight fadded from her right eye. Whitepaw stopped in front of Fallenstar again and relized that after the tom hit her eye, he stepped back. Just before vision in her right eye felled her, she saw blood drip in to it. Useing a white front paw to rub at her right eye and try to keep an eye on this rogue who dares to attack her family member. Finally sight from her right eye fadded completely. Whitepaw was breathing hard with some panic show slightly in her one good eye. She tried to hold off the panic and kept looking at the tom. He was saying "Now you see what I have lived with as a reminder at what I must do" What was he talking about. She didn't understand a word until he demanded to know able ShadowClan "We don't know anything about ShadowClan, we don't even know where their camp is. All we know is what happens in out own Clan and the only thing we know about the other clans is who is leader, Deputy, Medince cat and the Medcine's apprentice" she said with anger showing in her left eye. Whitepaw was keeping her right shut out of pain and a blood filled tear fell from her muzzle soon followed a three more. She glants at Fallenstar and saw that he was hurt. She looked quickle back at the rogue "Why attack us, when you could of just ask..........NOW LEAVE BEFORE I RIP YOU FUR OFF" she screamed the last part with her eye looking almost red mixed with blue.

[CheshireCat]

[smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]
( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )

Fallenstar yowled fiercely; he was at his wit's end. He dared to attack both of them just for the sake of asking a question! What kind of twisted game was this rogue playing? Not only that, but he had almost permanantly damaged Whitepaw's eye, or so it appeared. The leader stood up, barely even wincing at the pain. " We don't know anything about ShadowClan! Now come and face me like a real cat! " He screamed. With that note, the leader lunged for the rogue. Whitepaw was the daughter he never had, and he wasn't intending on letting this mangy, fox-hearted rogue take her away from him. His claws were extended, heart pounding at full velocity as he flew through the air, aiming for the rogue's throat. Fallenstar wasn't thinking straight; he didn't need to lose another loved one.

" this is you speaking! "

" this is someone else speaking! "

[smear:559251]I CAN'T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU THINK YOU GAVE ME[/smear:286ba4]
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[smear:286ba4]W O R D S[/smear:559251] • 140
[smear:286ba4]T A G G E D[/smear:559251] • Diablo, Whitepaw
[smear:286ba4]N O T E S[/smear:559251] • VENGEANCE SHALL BE HIS! Well, not really.

beauty is skin deep ,

[atrb=style, background: #000000; border: dashed #ffffff 4px; border-radius:35px 0px 35px 0px;] [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, border: dashed #000000 3px; width: 400px; height: 500px; float: left; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 20px; padding-bottom: 25px; padding-top: 25px;] diablo Diablo smiled to himself. The young pretty kitty was going blind in her eye. Just like he had many moons ago. He practically laughed when he heard her protests. Leave? When we're just getting started? You make me laugh. He sneered at her from afar. What's the point of asking a question if there's no fun involved? He narrowed his eyes, pinpointing his sights on the she-cat, ready to attack. Suddenly, a large weight hit his side. It was the tom he had disabled, and it appeared he was back on his feet. Diablo easily knocked the bloodthirsty tom off. He could see what he intended to do in his eyes. Diablo was outnumbered and outside of home territory. Time to get going before the going gets tough. Diablo easily knocked the bloodthirsty tom off. He could see what he intended to do in his eyes. THe gray tom snarled, cowering low to he ground. I'll be back, and next time, she'll be coming with me! On that note, he ran. It was the smart descision for the small tom. It was also time to report what he found out back to Monster. So he sped home. || Weak post. I know. Diablo has left the building. We can keep role-playing with Whitepaw and Fallenstar though. ||

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[Breezy~Chan]

*Whitepaw*

The young apprentice listened to what he said before Fallenstar had attacked the tom. Her leader was anger at the other tom for attacking her. Maybe she wa more to him then just another apprentice. Then the words that tom said before leaving "I'll be back, and next time, she'll be coming with me!". This frightened Whitepaw with all her heart. She didn't want to leave her home "you'll have to kill me first your cowered" she yelled after him. She stood there for a moment and tried to open her wounded eye. It hurt so much and she didn't know what she would do if Fallenstar realized that she was going blind in her right eye. Finally getting it open and blinking a few times. Blood tears fell down her muzzle along with her own clear tears. Everything was blurry in her right eye and it was hard to see. Whitepaw started to slowly panic at the thought of never getting to be a warrior. Her face was horrior, no tom would want a mate with a scar'ed face. Whitepaw had her back to Fallenstar and gental rubbed at her wounded eye while it was closed again "Please no, I don't want to to disappoint Crowfeather or Fallenstar" she whispered to herself. It was scary with the idea of losing sight in one eye. Whitepaw was scared for the first time in moons and it was over the littlist thing. But to Whitepaw is a big change and it was breaking her heart. Finally everything went black in her right eye. Whitepaw went crazy with panic and shock at the sudden darkness in her right eye. Whitepaw rubbed at the eye like crazy "NOOOOOOO, MY EYE, I CAN'T SEE, I CAN'T SEE" She screamed out in pain and fear. Whitepaw jumped around like crazy and stood on her hind legs rubing at the eye like mad.

[CheshireCat]

[smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]
( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )

Fallenstar yowled and snarled at the tom as he ran cowardly away from the scene. " Yeah! You better not come back. You hear me? Come back to RiverClan and I'll tear you to shreds! " He let out one last yowl before sitting down. THe leader heard Whitepaw mumble something under her breath. Suddenly she was screaming at the top of her lungs. " NOOOOOOO, MY EYE, I CAN'T SEE, I CAN'T SEE! " Fallenstar ran to the panicking she-cat and forced her to sit down. " Calm down Whitepaw! Panicking and rubbign it so hard will only make it worse. Let me have a look at it. " Without waiting for an answer he began examined her eye. It was scratched up pretty badly to the point that Fallenstar didn't want to look at it anymore. " THis isn't good. No, not at all. We need to get you back to camp, now! We can't afford to let you go blind! " On that note he nudged the she-cat to her feet and began nudging her more and more as they picked up the pace toward camp.

" this is you speaking! "

" this is someone else speaking! "

[smear:559251]I CAN'T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU THINK YOU GAVE ME[/smear:286ba4]
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[smear:286ba4]W O R D S[/smear:559251] • 189 words
[smear:286ba4]T A G G E D[/smear:559251] • Whitepaw
[smear:286ba4]N O T E S[/smear:559251] •Feel free to post again or just end it.

[Breezy~Chan]

Whitepaw whimpered as Fallenstar got her to the ground some how and then examined her right eye. Everything was black as night. She could only see half of Fallenstar's face and at his words, he seemed very worried about her sight. At his nudge she slowly got up and started to slowly walk close beside him. Whitepaw Whimpered again as she leaned on Fallenstar's shoulder for comfort from him. She was scared to death with the idea of being half blind and disappointing Fallenstar. He was her adopted father who she loved very much and wanted him to be proud of her. Whitepaw was really scared and wanted to just hide in his gray fur not caring if she got blood on him. It was a terrible shock to lose her sight in one eye. She kept her eye closed and you could see her other eye was darting around while they were walking.

[CheshireCat]

// We should close this thread and make a new one so Beewhisper can fix Whitepaw's eye and declare her blind. I'll start the thread. //