Firehawk~ShadowClan *DONE*

[Breezy~Chan]

Name: Firehawk
Age: 15
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Status: Alive
Rank: Warrior
IC Group:
Short Description: A stocky red tabby bicolor tom with blue eyes
Picture:
Appearance Description:

Firehawk is A stocky tabby bicolor tom with blue eyes. His fur is so orange that it looks red in color and is slighty striped. His blue eyes get dull when sad and glow like flames when angry. He has a long tail and long legs. His paws are very big and he is bigger then most she cats. When the sun is shining down on his fur, it looks like fire in the sun light (giving him his name). Firehawk has three scar's on his left hind leg and two going across the bridge of his nose. Three more scar's are on his front, right shoulder. Firehawk has muscle that ripples through out his soft pelt. His pelt is very soft to the touch and he has a pink nose. Firehawk's muzzle, neck, chest and under bell is white. All four of his paws are white and orange/redish in color.

Personality Description:

Firehawk has always been over protective of Ivysplash since the death of their Sister Ravenkit and of the mother they don't remember. He always seems to want to help out with the queens, even though his a warrior and dosen't have to do so. He love's to play with the kits and to talk with the queens to up date them on whats going on around ShadowClan. He is only kind to those he knows very well and even so, is some times a hot head. Firehawk will some times get in to fights with older warriors though other young warriors are what really get him in a bad mood. He is very loyal and will protect his Clan, because doing so lets him protect his sister too. Firehawk loves to hunt and fight. He some times needs to be left alone after getting put in a bad mood by some stupid cat who said the wrong thing, at the wrong time. He never snapes on kits or apprentices.

History:

Firehawk was born in a littlel of three kits, There was himself, Ravenkit and Ivykit. His patents Fernbreeze and Crowfrost were loving parents. But soon after their birth a case of greencouch hit ShadowClan. He losted his sister Ravenkit and his mother was weakened because of the sickness. Firekit had cried a few tears along with his sister over Ravenkits death. Firekit couold tell that his mother was going to die even at such a young age. His father abandoned them when they needed him to most. Fernbreeze had made sure her healty kits were taken care of before she finally dead. Firekit was heart broken with the lose of his mother.

No one ever spoke of Fernbreeze again after that attack of green couch. But Firekit would always remember, no matter if any never spoke of her again. Some moons later still feeling the pain of their mothers death. Firekit noticed that Ivykit seem to not even care that the she cat watching them wasn't their real mother. Don't get him wrong, he was greatful for what she did for his mother at her last moments. But the one he was mad at the most was his father and it was all his falt Fernbreeze was dead now. Later that some day, he was named Firepaw and his sister Ivypaw. He was given an experienced she cat warrior as his mentor. He wanted to make her proud was the first thing Firepaw felt he had to do. He proved himself a good warrior and was never really around Ivypaw much because Crowfrost had her out so earily in the morn, that Firepaw never got to spend time with Ivypaw any more.

It was coming close to the end of their training when a fox attacked the patrol he was in with his mentor and a few other clanmates. Firepaw fought with the strength of starclan with welcomed help of his clan mates. Ivypaw sadly wasn't there to see him fight for real for his frist time. His mentor told him how proud she was of him. Firepaw gave a smile at her kind words and she would most likely never know how much the meant to him. Back at camp a moon later Firepaw and his only sister were finally going to be made warriors. He was so happy and yet felt like he wasn't ready for this great honor. Firepaw told his mentor this and how he felt that he was ready yet. She smiled at him and told him that he was indeed ready to be given his warrior name.

It was that same afternoon when everyone was in the clearing of the camp to see the two apprentice be given their new names. Firepaw was named Firehawk and Ivypaw was named Ivysplash. Firehawks old mentor gave him a lick on the check to show just how proud she was. He blushed and everyone started to laugh happily until he joined in. He saw his mentor as a aunt in his life and loved her for caring.

Parents:

Fernbreeze~Mother~Dead
Crowfrost~Father~Alive

Siblings:

IvySplash~She-Cat~Alive
Ravenkit~She-cat~Dead

Mentor: No
Apprentice: Not yet
Mate: Not yet
Offspring:

Not yet

Other Significant Cats:

xx

Other:

xx

[CheshireCat]

I would approve this, but if you're going to copy and paste from Ivysplash's history, you at least have to modify it around your character. THe second paragraph is mainly about Ivypaw's apprenticeship. You shoudl make it to be more like Firehawk's aprpenticeship. Also, feel free to include a mentor. Let me know when you've done that and you're approved.

Also, make him as a warrior then audition for the deputy spot. You can audition before he's approved, by the way.

[CheshireCat]

Nice job! Approved! You can audition him now if you'd like.