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Post by CheshireCat on Aug 27, 2011 14:01:01 GMT -6
[smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )Fallenstar rushed into camp, a fierce look of determination in his eyes. He pushed cats aside despite their indignant yowls in order to get Whitepaw to the Medicine Cat's den. " Step aside! My apprentice is injured. Someone find Beewhisper! " Fallenstar guided his stunned apprentice to a small nest inside of the den. " Lay down here. Beewhisper will be here any moment. " The gray tom gave her a friendly nudge on the head before racing to the Twin Willows. Th large cat clambered up their sturdy trunks until he reached the point where the trees intersected, forming a small seat for a cat. " Cats of RiverClan! Get Beewhisper to help my apprentice and then sit down for a clan meeting! " With a worried look in his eyes, he looked down at Whitepaw. Fallenstar had never seen her so helpless. Normally she'd be the brave and determined apprentice he'd always known but today had changed everything. Where are you Beewhisper? Can't you help my apprentice?
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Post by Breezy~Chan on Aug 27, 2011 14:23:09 GMT -6
*Whitepaw*
She didn't really understand what was going on and was in a bit of shock from the sudden lose of her right eye. The young apprentice struggled to snape out of it and pay attention to what was going around her. Then she hear-ed Fallenstar's voice and it was the light in her shady vision right now. Whitepaw felt him nudge her head and she without hurting herself gave her own nudge. She wanted to stay near him right now and not be left alone. But just was sudden as the nudge came it was gone. Whitepaw gave a whimper of fear and didn't know what to be maybe just lay in the nest he had her lay in. But it was too dim in the Medcine cats den. She slowly came to her paws and padded to the enterance way "Fallenstar" she whispered like frightened kit. She lost her mother at a very young age. She Whitepaw had to grow up being an adult or at least being alone when her father was hunting or out in battle. She leaned on the den enterance listening to out for anything. She hear-ed Fallenstar's voice and it gave her a little comfort to her it close by. Whitepaw slowly lay down by the den opening with still enough room for anyone to come in. Her right side of her clawed face was in show for the whole clan to see. But she didn't care what anyone thought. Blood was still dripping down her muzzle a little in.
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Post by `Bee on Aug 27, 2011 23:54:28 GMT -6
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Beewhisper emerged from the Elder's den. He had been busy inspecting the nests for any ticks and anything sharp. It was a seemingly boring day with the usual routine going by fast. It wasn't until he heard his name did Beewhisper come out of his zombie-like state. "Cats of RiverClan! Get Beewhisper to help my apprentice and then sit down for a clan meeting!" The brown tabby tom looked around the camp and became confused. What's going on? He asked himself. His eyes went straight toward his den. There, laying in the entrance was Whitepaw. Except she wasn't white, she was red. With no hesitation, Beewhisper went straight for the young white she-cat.
"What happened?" He asked, trying to clean some of the blood from Whitepaw's face. Herbs started running through his mind. He needed the wound to not become infected so Chewed Gumweed was needed. Poppy seeds would be needed to help with shock and cobwebs would be needed to help prevent excessive bleeding. A moss ball socked in water, a few of them actually, would be helpful too. She would need some water. "I need a couple moss balls with water. And if someone could give me a paw here that would be great." He left the she-cat where she was, not wanting her to move. He grabbed the gumweed, goldenrod and marigold and chewed it up as much as possible. The taste was not something Beewhisper liked but he ignored it. "This is going to sting." He mewed, pressing it against Whitepaw's wound. He didn't like that is was on her eye and the tom had a feeling he wasn't going to be able to save it.
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Post by Breezy~Chan on Aug 28, 2011 0:14:46 GMT -6
Smokedrift and Bramblepaw*
A gray tabby warrior was just walking in with a russet red tabby apprentice; both holding moss balls for the elders. But when they entered camp it seemed Beewhisper need water for a cat and it was very improtant. The older tom looked at the apprentice and nodded his head towards the Medcine cats den. Smokedrift was loyal to Riverclan and would do anything to help. He hoped that Bramblepaw would have followed him to help out. It would be a good thing to; because as soon as he saw what was happening "what can I do to help Beewhisper" he said right after seeing the bad shape Whitepaw was in. This was Fallenstars apprentice and she was the best trained apprentice his see since he was an apprentice. It looked like Whitepaw might lose her eye too. Smokedrift sighed at that and knew it would hurt her a lot to have to be retrained. He heard Whitepaw whimper when some herbs were placed on her face.
The young apprentice who was the same age as Whitepaw did indeed follow Smokedrift to help out a fellow clanmate in need. He then saw Whitepaw's wound and couldn't help but feel bad for her. Bramblepaw sat his moss ball beside Smokedrifts that was next to Beewhisper "is she going to be oK Beewhisper" he asked worried about his denmate. Whitepaw had been made an apprentice around the same time as him and owlpaw. Bramblepaw had become friends with Whitepaw somewhat. He watched from the side lines to keep out of the way. But also to be able to hear the meeting and to watch what was happening in the medcine cats den. He watched as Whitepaw tried to open her other eye and could see the blue of it slight with it half open. It looked in Fallenstar's direction "Papa Fallenstar" she whispered out before looking away.
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Post by CheshireCat on Aug 28, 2011 10:31:40 GMT -6
Owlpaw padded in after Smokedrift. She was gazing at him, day-dreaming about what their kits would look like. She would name one Smokekit, after Smokedrit, and he would name on Owlkit, after Owlpaw. She sighed, but in the midst of her day-dream she almost walked into her brother. " Whoops, sorry. Wait what's happening? " Only after her near collision with Bramblepaw did she notice the chaos in camp. Cats were scrambling to help Beewhisper take care of someone while Fallenstar had called a clan meeting. Owlpaw, swiveled around the cats crowding Beewhisper to get a better look at his patient. It was Whitepaw, adn one of her eyes was badly scratched. " Oh my StarClan! What happened? Are you alright? " Owlpaw shivered. It looked disgusting, and she wasn't sure if she could take much longer just staring at it. She shook her head and trotted over to beneath the Twin Willows, where she took a seat and looked up to her leader.
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" this is someone else speaking! " WORDS! 164 words TAGS! Fallenstar, Whitepaw, Beewhisper, Smokedrift, Bramblepaw NOTES! Breezy? Owlpaw and Bramblepaw are more than twice as old as Whitepaw. CREDITS! Template By arro @ Caution! LYRICS! "Mine" by Taylor Swift
[/size][/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote] [smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )Fallenstar stood rigid as he waited for Beewhisper to arrive. When he finally got to work on Whitepaw, he let out a loud sigh of relief. She would be fine. It was okay if he'd have to retrain her. All of that work would be worth it compared to having her become an elder at such a young age. Regaining his authority, he straightened his poise and cleared his throat. " Cats of RiverClan! There was a rogue on our territory today. It attacked Whitepaw and I during a training excersize, leaving me with a mangled back and Whitepaw with a blind eye. The rogue was looking for information on ShadowClanIt was a dark gray tabby tom with icy blue eyes. One of his eyes was blind. If you see this tom, fetch a patrol immediately and confront him. None of you should be so mouse-brained as to try and prove themselves by facing this tom alone. He is dangerous and deadly. " Fallenstar paused for a second, letting his words sink in to get the message through. RiverClan didn't need any foolish, injured warriors or apprentices. "I want a patrol to go out after this and try to find this tom. I don't want to risk bringing him close to camp, so bring him to the willow tree that hangs over the main river. We will interrogate him there. Smokedrift, gather a patrol of 4 or 5 cats to go find this tom. Send a messanger if you find him. Any questions? If not you are dismissed. " Fallenstar looked over at Whitepaw. She had murmured something in a daze of confusion. He ran to her, ignoring the cats who had questions. Looking over to Bewhisper, he whispered, " Is she going to be alright? " He smiled down on his apprentice. " I'm right here, kiddo. "
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Post by ♦Ginger♦ on Aug 28, 2011 10:41:09 GMT -6
Both Shockpaw and Emberash heard the announcement. Shockpaw missed the whole don't prove yourself part. He was jumping up and down excitedly. He wanted to go so badly. He had improved on his training. He knew how to fight! He wanted to do this so badly. He wen right toward the leader to beg and let him go. Well till he saw Whitepaw and realized it wasn't such a good idea. Instead he backed away and calmly waited for everyone Disperse.
As for Emberash she calmly walked up to the leader wishing she knew more. She listened intently thinking on who could do such a thing. She wondered if she would be chosen to go on the main route or one of the sides.
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Post by `Bee on Aug 31, 2011 11:12:39 GMT -6
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Beewhisper was glad to see Smokedrift willing to help. The tom had moss balls drenched in water. It was perfect. He had already put some herbs on the wound but he needed the blood to be washed away. "Can you help wash away the blood on the wound?" The brown tabby grabbed one of the moss balls and squeezed it onto Whitepaw. The blood was slowly washing away, but he needed to see how her eye was doing. "is she going to be oK Beewhisper?" Bramblepaw's words didn't really register to Beewhisper and he simply didn't answer. He didn't have an answer. Even with the blood slowing down and the herbs working, the Medicine cat would not know of her condition until tomorrow. But he knew, deep down he knew she would not be able to use that eye again.
He listened to the leader's speech. But his mind was on Whitepaw and trying to save her eye. He was steady on his paws and his breathing was even. He wasn't nervous but he was definitely worried for the apprentice. Even if her eye could be saved she would be on nest rest for a couple of moons, leaving her without proper training and behind the other apprentices her age. It would hurt her emotionally, Beewhisper was sure. He, himself didn't like being behind the other apprentices. He was twenty moons old before he got his full name! But it didn't matter now.
Fallenstar was there now, beside them. The vicious rogue wasn't going to get away with this. He would pay and Beewhisper didn't want any part in it. He wasn't a violent tom and he was sure Fallenstar wasn't either. But when you mess with a leader's apprentice, there was going to be some consequences. "Is she going to be alright?" Fallenstar asked. "I don't know. He answered back. "I won't know until I can clean and cover her eye." He didn't want to say anything in front of Whitepaw and put her into more shock. "Eat these Whitepaw, please." He places poppy seeds on her nose for her to lick off. He needed her to eat them. She would need her rest. "We should move her into the den. She's going to need her rest and I need to cover her eye." He mewed to the growing coward around him and the she-cat apprentice.
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Post by Breezy~Chan on Aug 31, 2011 20:23:04 GMT -6
*Whitepaw*
The young apprentice lefted her head after the poppy seed was placed on her nose. Whitepaw looked at Beewhisper. She knew what the little black seeds were and didn't like the idea of resting. Whitepaw looked at Fallenstar for help with the Medicine cat. But at Beewhispers please could not think of not listening. The older tom just wanted to help her and so she licked the small black seed off her nose. Whitepaw gave the Medicine cat a weak smile after eatting the seeds "Can Papa Fallenstar stay with me BeeWhisper" she asked with a much stronger tone. She was very slowly coming out of her shock and then slowly laid her head on the ground. The poppy seeds to a few minutes to work. But soon Whitepaw was sleeping soundly and looked paceful for the moment.
*Bramblepaw and Smokedrift*
The young russet tabby apprentice was worried about his friend and wanted to know if she would be okey. He would always be there for a friend and for his sister. Bramblepaw looked at Owlpaw "Whitepaw and Fallenstar were attacked by a rogue Owlpaw. Beewhisper doesn't know if she will be able to use that eye again" he said sadly to his beloved sister. The young tom sat beside her and wrapped his long tail around his paws as the watched as Whitepaw was taken care of.
Smokedrift went to work at Beewhispers word and gantle started to care the wound of any blood. But than he heard that Fallenstar wanted him to take a patrol out. The gray tabby nodded to Beewhisper before leaving to gather some of his clan mates. Smokedrift went to the center of camp and looked around " OK I want Emberash, Bramblepaw and Owlpaw to came with me on this Patrol" he said in a calm tone, but loud tone. Smokedrift choose the apprentices he did, because they had more experance then Shockpaw and they would be less likely to be to terribly hurt. He wanted more warriors, but it seemed that everyone was not in camp at the moment. He'd have to do with what was given to him at this time. If he needed backup, he'd send Bramblepaw or Owlpaw back to camp for help. Smokedrift waited for his group to gather around to have a talk before leaving.
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