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Post by CheshireCat on Sept 20, 2011 20:41:44 GMT -6
Owlpaw padded into the clearing her tail alshing with excitement. The tortoiseshell tabby quivered with excitement. She didn't need the powers of StarClan to know what they were doing today. It was her final assessment. Today would decide whether she became a warrior or not. She was determined to do well, considering how embarrassing it would be to have to continue her training another moon or two. She seated herself in the clearing and waited for the others to arrive.
" this is you speaking! "
" this is someone else speaking! " WORDS! 164 words TAGS! Fallenstar, Whitepaw, Beewhisper, Smokedrift, Bramblepaw NOTES! Breezy? Owlpaw and Bramblepaw are more than twice as old as Whitepaw. CREDITS! Template By arro @ Caution! LYRICS! "Mine" by Taylor Swift
[/size][/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote] [smear:286ba4]SO I WON'T LET YOU CLOSE ENOUGH TO HURT ME[/smear:559251]( • NO,IWON'TASKYOU,YOUTOJUSTDESERTME • )Fallenstar trudged alongside Owlpaw, thoughts running rampant in his mind. Should I let Whitepaw participate? Is she ready? I don't want her to fail! What if she does fail? Will she ever get over it? What if what if what if? Fallenstar shook his head as if to rid himself of the thoughts. Whitepaw would do fine. Her new training was very promising. He had just as much faith in her as he would've before she was injured. Fallenstar nodded at Owlpaw, as he seemed to have forgotten she was there. The big gray tom seated himself beside her. Owlpaw would pass, I'm sure of it. She's such a promising warrior. Fallenstar couldn't possibly think of holding her back; se'd never fail that badly.
" this is you speaking! "
" this is someone else speaking! " [smear:559251]I CAN'T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU THINK YOU GAVE ME[/smear:286ba4]( • IT'STIMETOSAYGOODBYETOTURNINGTABLES,TURNINGTABLES • ) [smear:286ba4]W O R D S[/smear:559251] • 309 words [smear:286ba4]T A G G E D[/smear:559251] • Same as above [smear:286ba4]N O T E S[/smear:559251] • same as above
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Post by ♤Ace on Oct 6, 2011 15:41:54 GMT -6
[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellSpacing,0,true][atrb=cellPadding,0,true][atrb=width,473,true] | [atrb=background,http://i56.tinypic.com/21nfexx.jpg]Reedfang padded silently behind the two cats. He was excited about today, even if he didn't show it. It was unusual for him to be so quiet, but the pressure kept his mouth clamped shut. He didn't want to say something stupid enough to hinder his appentice's performance today. Bramblepaw was very promising. The two toms had trained harder than most his age, and Reedfang was proud of both the russet tom and himself. The practically stoic tom was impressive in almost every aspect of his training, and Reedfang knew for a fact that he'd become a warrior if not today then soon. Reedfang lifted his head a little higher as he walked, remembering that it was he himself that had done such a great job. Maybe even good enough to get another apprentice.
Reedfang padded into the clearing Fallenstar had selected for the first part of the assessment. His blue eyes scanned the small open space, surrounded by a variety of plant life such as ferns, flowers, tall grasses, and small shrubs. A few bugs buzzed around here and there and Reedfang batted a few pesky ones away with his paw, lashing his tail in irritation. He wa glad that it was leaf-fall; the bugs would be gone soon. The black tom sat down next to Fallenstar and nodded at the large gray tom. Fallenstar was an impressive cat. He was proud and dignified, holding his head high all of the time, and his large body only added to that height. At the same time, RiverClan's leader had a heart, caring for every cat, big and small, within the confines of his clan.
Owlpaw was a different story. She was pretty enough, but her quiet nature made her a bore to talk to, in his opinion. He knew Smokedrift had a fancy for her, considering all of those glances and sleep-talking about it, but his brother didn't show it in public. Reedfang assumed that he didn't want to affect her training with his crush on his apprentice, whcih was a smart choice. The black tom was glad he had a male apprentice, so the same scouldn't be said for himself, being such a hopeless romantic. His mind trailed to Lightswallow for a second before returning to the present. Reedfang sent a smile towards Owlpaw before facing the entrance of the clearing, awaiting both his apprentice and his brother.
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Post by Breezy~Chan on Nov 7, 2011 20:32:53 GMT -6
*Smokedrift, Bramblepaw & Whitepaw*
A russet tabby tom was the first to come in the clearing and as he saw his mentor as well as his sister. First Bramblepaw rub his pelt against Reedfang his mentor as he nodded his hello and then brushed pelts with his sister who he loved with all his heart "Hello sister, I hope your morning has been well" he said kindly as he knew to pass back around. Bramblepaw walked back over to Reedfang and sat beside his mentor with a smile. It was always good to see his mentor who could almost be like a big brother to him. Bramblepaw then looked back at the clearings enterance for Smokedrift had been behind him as he came through.
Smokedrift was sure if he could handle being around his brother. But he was going to deal with it for his apprentice sake. The gray tabby walked in to the clearing and dipped his head to Fallenstar "Good morning Fallenstar, Bramblepaw, Owlpaw and ............brother" he took long before he said the last one. It was as if he was worried that by greeting his only brother that a fight would break out. Some times Smokedrift wondered about what had brought them to this. Two brother who had been together since birth and they were avoiding each other like one of them had green couch of something. It saded Smokedrift some times to think about it and so he would push it to the back of his mind. Smokedrift sat beside owlpaw as she was his apprentice.
A silver spotted tabby she cat walked in to the clearing right after Smokedrift and walked over to sit beside Fallenstar. But before she sat down and waited for things to start. Whitepaw came on to her hind legs to give Fallenstar a lick on his cheek in hello "Hi Fallenstar" Whitepaw said as she sat down. It had been a hard road after the attack and her losing her sight in that one eye. Whitepaw some times thought of herself as ugle with the scar of claws going down the right side of her face over her right eye. Whitepaw was lucky to be able to open it and yet it was clouded over to show anyone who saw it that she was blind in that eye. Whitepaw looked at Reedfang with both her eyes. She smiled "Hi Reedfang, Smokedrift, Owlpaw and Bramblepaw" she said in greetings to all around her. Whitepaw had come back to her normal self after healing from the attack and had continued her training with Fallenstar.
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